Author: Julie Mikolajewski
School/Organization:
Penn Alexander School
Year: 2013
Seminar: Modern and Contemporary American Poetry
Grade Level: 5-8
Keywords: close reading, content, form, modern poetry, poetry
School Subject(s): English, Language Arts, Literature, Poetry
This unit is designed for middle school students studying Literacy, English, or Language Arts. Its purpose is to expose students to the method and pedagogy of a collaborative close reading as well as to expose students to poets and individuals who used words to make sense of their realities. Unlike close reading in other disciplines, the collaborative close reading that the students will participate in during this unit of study will be text-based as much as possible. It is not the intent of the course of study to learn the historical and contextual backgrounds of the poet or poems, but rather it is a study of the process and form of the poetry. The close reading activity in most cases will be a “cold reading” where the teacher does not provide background information on the poem or poet. Furthermore, students will be encouraged to produce works that are representative of their own identities and realities.
Close reading a text alongside the students allows for the text to be the expert and the teacher and the student to both participate in the conversation as learners. Collaborative close reading allows for the discussion in the room to become dialogic talk rather than monologic talk. Students and teachers alike are interacting with the text both as inkblots on the page and through “the interplay between particular signs and a particular reader at a particular time and place (Rosenblatt, x).” This helps relieve the teacher of the anxiety of being “an expert” on the piece and acknowledges the power of the written word and text, in this case the poem itself, and the students in the room.
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Overview This unit is designed for middle school students studying Literacy, English, or Language Arts. Its purpose is to expose students to the method and pedagogy of a collaborative close reading as well as to expose students to poets and individuals who used words to make sense of their realities. Unlike close reading in other disciplines, the collaborative close reading that the students will participate in during this unit of study will be text-based as much as possible. It is not the intent of the course of study to learn the historical and contextual backgrounds of the poet or poems, but rather it is a study of the process and form of the poetry. The close reading activity in most cases will be a “cold reading” where the teacher does not provide background information on the poem or poet. Furthermore, students will be encouraged to produce works that are representative of their own identities and realities. During the close reading, the teacher will act as a facilitator in the process, offering positive feedback and encouragement as well as providing a framework for the reading through thoughtful questioning techniques. The method of collaborative close reading breaks down the barriers between the teacher and those being taught; it fosters and empowers the students by allowing for their ideas, reading ability and capability, and their knowledge to be valued and acknowledged. Sitting down side-by-side reading collaboratively with the student, rather than “teaching” a piece to them, allows for greater ownership and agency on the students’ part. Close reading a text alongside the students allows for the text to be the expert and the teacher and the student to both participate in the conversation as learners. Collaborative close reading allows for the discussion in the room to become dialogic talk rather than monologic talk. Students and teachers alike are interacting with the text both as inkblots on the page and through “the interplay between particular signs and a particular reader at a particular time and place (Rosenblatt, x).” This helps relieve the teacher of the anxiety of being “an expert” on the piece and acknowledges the power of the written word and text, in this case the poem itself, and the students in the room. Rationale According to recent studies, many students are showing up unready and underprepared for college. The results of the ACT indicated that more than a quarter of the 2012 graduates did not meet the college readiness benchmark scores for all four-subject areas in English, reading, math and science, and sixty percent of students missed the benchmark scores in at least two of the four subject area tests. The 2012 results of the SAT indicate that the fifty-seven percent of the 2012 graduating class who took the test earned a combined score below the level needed to earn a B-minus or better in the first year at a four-year college (Sheehy, 2012). In his book Engaging Ideas: The Professor’s Guide to Integrating Writing, Critical Thinking, and Active Learning in the Classroom, John Bean argues that students are not prepared for the demands of college reading. He discusses the causes of students’ poor reading habits and suggests strategies and assignments to improve reading skills. Included in his suggestions to improve instructions are that teachers show their own reading processes and annotations, and develop assignments that require students to interact with texts (Bean, 2011). In June 2010, the Common Core State Standards were released, and forty-six states (excluding Texas, Alaska, Virginia and Nebraska) and five territories adopted the standards. The standards require students to engage with texts of increased complexity with the stated intention of ensuring that students are prepared to enter credit bearing entry courses in two and four year college programs, or are prepared to enter the workforce. The Core emphasizes students building knowledge about the world through TEXT, the building of transferable vocabulary, increased time for close reading, and the engagement of students in rich and rigorous conversations about text (National Governor’s Association, 2010). According to Richard Paul and Linda Elder in the article “The Art of Close Reading,” skilled readers do not read blindly, but purposefully. They have an agenda or purpose in mind before and during their reading; they have learned to read in different ways for different purposes (Paul & Elder, 2003). Skilled readers know when to slow down, when to speed up, when to read closely and when to skim a text. Skilled readers have a broad vocabulary and a wide range of skills and strategies. In his book Reading Poetry in the Middle Grades, Paul Janeczko argues that poetry helps awaken quiet students and that poetry is “inherently turbocharged” and will allow for teachers and students to engage with both content and skills. Furthermore, in the book Notice and Note Strategies for Close Readings by Kylene Beers and Robert E. Probst, it is argued that by increasing the dialogic talk in the classroom, thus decreasing the amount of monologic, authoritative lecture increases students’ engagement. By participating in dialogue, students become co-constructors of their own knowledge, and they are more likely to take ownership and find relevance in their learning (Beers & Probst, 2013). My first conscious experience in the value of close reading did not come until the first semester of my graduate year at Penn. Before this time, I read and analyzed texts for class, but not closely. The activity that I had participated in to that point that most closely resembles close reading was the reading I had done of the Bible personally, at school and in Church. For the most part, I had spent my formational academic years reading for the “big ideas” and for a surface level understanding of many different disciplines- trusting that the experts were telling me the truth about life and “what is.” My reading, and learning for that matter, focused generally on what knowledge I could gain or acquire, rather than my interaction with a text and its ideas. Furthermore, my “academic reading” would not illicit questions; I was simply engaging in the process because I had to, or because I wanted to prepare for and do well on an exam. Sure, I was learning some, but quite honestly, most of what I had read academically speaking had bored me. That all changed when I enrolled in a class taught by Dr. John Fantuzzo, a GSE professor at Penn. At the start of the semester, Dr. Fantuzzo discussed the difference between graduate education and undergraduate education. He used an analogy to illuminate the difference, comparing reading to target practice. No longer would students be aiming to just hit the target while shooting arrows; they needed to hit the bulls-eye and become precise in their knowledge about a specific text. He suggested that there needed to be a shift in his students’ perspectives. The lecture began to spur on thought within me, and then came the first assignment- reading Francis Bacon’s Of Studies. In the piece, Bacon asserts, “Read not to contradict and confute; nor to believe and take for granted; nor to find talk and discourse; but to weigh and consider. Some books are to be tasted, others to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested; that is, some books are to be read only in parts; others to be read, but not curiously; and some few to be read wholly, and with diligence and attention (Bacon, 1601).” We read Of Studies once; we read it twice; we read it a thousand times, then we wrote and rewrote a paper on its meaning. Believe it or not, it was the first time in my formal education experience that I was truly intellectually curious, and to this day the two lines from the piece that I have shared have stayed with me and have influenced my practice. My approach as an academic reader was forever changed by this experience, so when I eventually became a reading teacher, close reading became the method I used for teaching my students how to read a text. When the Common Core standards called for the practice to be implemented in classrooms across the country, I was not shocked. Though it has quickly become one of the new “buzzwords” in the educational field, close reading is not a fad and it has a multitude of benefits. Most times, close reading involves a short piece of text that is read multiple times for the purpose of appreciation and deep comprehension and analysis. The process allows for the gradual release of responsibility by the teacher, so that eventually after the teacher has modeled the approach, the students bear the burden of the reading and questioning. Not only does close reading allow for a deep understanding of a selection, but if done collaboratively, it is a technique that teaches students to think critically, create logical arguments based on textual evidence, and to analyze and critique the arguments of others (Brown and Kappes, 2013). In order to meet the demands of the Common Core Standards and to prepare students for the rigors of college reading, students will participate in collaborative close reads in this unit. They will be exposed to various texts of modern poets who have used words and art to celebrate and make sense of their identity and their world. The major purposes of the unit will be to expose students to modern poetry and to emphasize the art of close reading. Students will learn that many of modern poets have focused on the process and form of their poem rather than the content that their poems relay, with the HOW being more important than the WHY. Modern poets hoped to make language new again. Stylistic choices and the breaking of formal conventions by the modern poets allowed for a reinvention of the concept of art and beauty. Students will learn that words can be used to explore their personal identity, their world and that their experiences are integral to fostering agency and independence in learning. It is this very opportunity to express themselves without feeling the need to create something that makes sense that cultivate a thirst and hunger to be literate and educated- and therefore liberated. As stated previously, close reading has been a strategy that I have used with my students since I became a reading teacher, so when I noticed that a class was being offered at Penn on the collaborative close reading of poetry, I jumped at the opportunity to learn more about the practice and about poetry. Watching Al Filreis, the professor, teach in real-time and through video lessons has helped me refine how I approach close reading tasks with my students. Three areas of my close reading approach have changed from my experience in the class. Now as I approach close readings with my class, I attempt to withhold my interpretation while reading with my students, attempt to allow the kids to discover the devices while reading rather than looking at the devices in isolation, and allow more student agency and ownership by lessening my talk. Below, I have shared an example of a close reading lesson using Theodore Roethke “My Papa’s Waltz.” The poems that are included in this unit were carefully selected after participating in the semester long seminar class at the Kelly Writers House at the University of Pennsylvania with Professor Al Filreis. Filreis teaches versions of this class using the collaborative close reading approach to Penn undergraduate students as well as over 36,000 people through Coursera. His modern poetry site is an exhaustive resource for materials on modern poetry if the chosen poems are not appropriate for your class or grade level. Not only does the site contain links to many poems; it also includes video recordings of Filreis teaching, and links to Penn Sound materials. Penn Sound is an audio archive that includes many of the poet’s reading their individual material. The following four sites will be most beneficial to teachers preparing to implement similar units in their classroom. http://writing.upenn.edu/pennsound/ http://writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88v/ http://writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88v/ http://writing.upenn.edu/~afilreis/88v/tip2013.html Objectives Students will be able to participate in a collaborative close read that is TEXT BASED. Students will explore the nuances of language and the multiple meaning of words. Students will distinguish between form and content in a poem. Students will identify and analyze poetic devices. Students will argue that the form is just as, or more important than, the content of the poem. Students will write in the style of an author we studied. Students will be exposed to modern poetry.
Various strategies will be used to explore the modern poetry works. The overarching strategy that will be used is the collaborative close read approach. To exemplify the approach that will be used with the students, I will share a modeled lesson of the approach using Theodore Roethke’s poem “My Papa’s Waltz.” My Papa’s Waltz The whiskey on your breath Could make a small boy dizzy; But I hung on like death: Such waltzing was not easy. We romped until the pans Slid from the kitchen shelf; My mother’s countenance Could not unfrown itself. The hand that held my wrist Was battered on one knuckle; At every step you missed My right ear scraped a buckle. You beat time on my head With a palm caked hard by dirt, Then waltzed me off to bed Still clinging to your shirt. An Audio file of this poem can be found at: http://www.poets.org/poet.php/prmPID/13 Guide to Close Reading “My Papa’s Waltz” Student one might be assigned: The whiskey on your breath Could make a small boy dizzy; Then, student two will discuss the next two lines: But I hung on like death: Such waltzing was not easy. Student three would then begin talking about his assigned lines. We romped until the pans Slid from the kitchen shelf; Student four would then begin to discuss My mother’s countenance Could not unfrown itself. Student five would begin discussing the next two lines. The hand that held my wrist Was battered on one knuckle; Student six would then begin discussing the next two lines. At every step you missed My right ear scraped a buckle. Student seven would then begin discussing his assigned lines. You beat time on my head With a palm caked hard by dirt, Student eight would then begin discussing the last two lines of the poem. Then waltzed me off to bed Still clinging to your shirt. An interesting paper about how two divergent readings appeared in one teacher’s class while studying this poem is included here: http://bcs.bedfordstmartins.com/virtualit/poetry/critical_def ine/readrespessay.pdf Poets/Poems that will be used in the Unit Ten days of lessons are provided in the following pages. If a teacher wants to shorten or lengthen the number of days in the unit, modifications are possible. That being said, the works that are selected were done so carefully. The unit begins with works by Emily Dickinson and Walt Whitman, considered by many to be the founders of modern poetry. After discussing Dickinson and Whitman, the unit will move to selections by William Carlos Williams, an imagist. Following Williams, will be close readings of Gertrude Stein and Tristan Tzara. The end of the unit is comprised of poems written by poets that are still writing today; some of which are language poets, such as Perelman and Hejinian, and some that are conceptualists, like Magee. Each of these selections conveys how the form of the poem is more important in conveying the author’s message than the content of the poem. After careful study of different variations of modern poetry, students will be given an opportunity to write poetry in the style of one of the poets that we have studied. -use chart from Filreis’s class
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Ancillary Material General Simple Steps for a Collaborative Close Read 2.Students will mark poem using AVID “Charting the Text” method. The left-hand margin will be used to annotate the content of the poem, while the right-hand side will be used for analyzing sound, word choice, poetic devices and writing down thoughts and questions. 3.Teacher will read the poem aloud. Students will be given a handout from the University of Texas that will help guide them through their individual reading of the poem. http://uwc.utexas.edu/handouts/poetry-close-reading Common Core Standards The following Common Core Standards will be addressed in the unit. Read closely to determine what the text says explicitly and to make logical inferences from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to support conclusions drawn from the text. R.CCR.4– Interpret words and phrases as they are used in a text, including determining technical, connotative, and figurative meanings, and analyze how specific word choices shape meaning or tone. R.CCR.9– Analyze how two or more texts address similar themes or topics in order to build knowledge or to compare the approaches the authors take. R.CCR.10 Read and comprehend complex literary and informational texts independently and proficiently.