Genre study: POETRY
Text: Ink Knows No Borders
Poetry will be the entry point into this unit, which complements both Sophocles’ Antigone and Uribe’s verse novel. The introduction to Ink Knows No Borders offers poignant epigraphs that I may use as quick writing prompts. The anthology opens with Asghar’s query, “america, am I not your refugee?” (2019, p. XV).
In a more in-depth poetry analysis, students will collaborate in pairs/groups to select one of the following poems (listed in below) from this anthology to read, analyze, and present.
Lesson: Reading and writing poetry
| Time: 4 classes
Objective: SWBAT select, analyze, and present a poem with common themes of borders, immigration, and nationhood.
Standards: English Language Arts Standards » Reading: Literature » Grade 9-10
English Language Arts Standards » Writing » Grade 9-10
Instructional Strategies: cooperative learning, think-pair-share, graphic organizers
Materials: Selected poems from Ink Knows No Borders
Zamora’s “Second Attempt Crossing,” Elhillo’s “Self-portrait with no flag,” Limon’s “A New National Anthem,” and Rios’ “The Border: A Double Sonnet.” Additional poems that I will use to introduce this unit include:
New Vocabulary: mood, tone
from A New National Anthem by Ada Limón | Poetry Foundation
tenacious – not readily relinquishing a position, principle, or course of action; determined.
hireling – a person employed to undertake menial work
sustenance – nourishment; food and drink regarded as a source of strength
Lesson Introduction: Students will view renditions of the Black national anthem Beyoncé- Lift Every Voice (From “Homecoming: A Film by Beyoncé”
Alicia Keys – Lift Every Voice and Sing Performance
Direct Instruction: I will guide students in a reading of Limon’s poem, followed by viewing the U.S. poet laureate reading her poem
“A New National Anthem” Reading by Ada Limón
I will model a “a think aloud” analysis of the poem (head and heart) as an example.
Students will select one of the aforementioned poems, collaborate in a poetry analysis, and create a presentation using Poem, Head, Heart (2017, Beers & Probst).
During their reading of Sophocles’ Antigone, students will compose odes. In addition to the Chorus’ odes in the play, I offer the following poems of praise from living poets as inspiration:
The Ode
Peer Review: Odes
Group Work: Students will select one of the aforementioned poems Poetry from Ink Knows No Borders and engage in a poetry analysis and create a presentation (slides).
Closure: Students will present their poems to their peers. |
Lesson: Reading and writing poetry collaboratively–The Ghazal
“I’ll do what I must if I’m bold in real time.
A refugee, I’ll be paroled in real time.” –Agha Shahid Ali
| Time: 2-3 classes
Objectives: SWBAT identify the poetic form of a ghazal; students will read and analyze ghazals; students will compose a ghazal collaboratively.
Standards: English Language Arts Standards » Reading: Literature » Grade 9-10
English Language Arts Standards » Writing » Grade 9-10
Instructional Strategies: read aloud, think aloud, collaborative writing
Materials: Chapter 54, “A Formal Form for Fun (and Hopefully Not Too Much Frustration): The Ghazal” (Vecchione 2020 p.126).
Ghazal by Agha Shahid Ali | Poetry Foundation
Ghareeb by Fatimah Asghar – Poems | Academy of American Poets
Ghazal Bread — Bowery Poetry
New Vocabulary: ghazal, Ghazal | Academy of American Poets, enjambment, ghareeb–stranger, one without a home and thus, deserving of pity. Also, westerner.
Lesson Introduction: What is a ghazal? Listen to Adeeba Shahid Talukder reads Faisal Mohyuddin’s “Ghazal for the Diaspora” Teacher will ask: What do you notice about the lines that you hear and read?
Direct Instruction: Teacher and students will read aloud and annotate Agha Shahid Ali’s “Ghazal” and Fatimah Asghar’s “Ghareeb”. Students will analyze this Arabic form of poetry written in couplets (traditionally between 5 and 15). Teacher will elicit observations from students and offer the elements of a ghazal: rhyme scheme–the couplet’s rhyming word, the gafia, appears twice in the first couplet, the refrain or the last word or phrase of the second line of each couplet is called the radif, and the poet’s signature–either their proper name, nickname, or a derivation of their name (in first or third person) appears in the last couplet.
Students will identify the elements of this poetic form as they listen to an excerpt of the collaborative ghazal, Poetry is like Bread. This ghazal was created during the pandemic and inspired by Pablo Neruda’s quotation: “On earth, before writing was invented, poetry flourished. That is why we know that poetry is like bread; it should be shared by all, by scholars, and by peasants, by all our vast, incredible, extraordinary family of humanity.”
Group work: Students will brainstorm topics (other than bread), select one of their ideas, and draft a 15 couplet ghazal on a shared Google document.
Closure: Students will read their couplets aloud. They will stand and line up in order to make the ghazal flow. They may read it backwards like a palindrome poem. This revision will continue until they decide on the order of couplets. |
Genre study: INFORMATIONAL TEXT
Text: The tragedy giving hope to Syria’s women – BBC News
Students will read the article, “The tragedy giving hope to Syria’s women” in order to see how Antigone is still being performed today, specifically as a vehicle of social justice.
Students will annotate the article using Muhammad’s five pursuits: identity, skills,
intellect, criticality, and joy. Here are the guiding questions from Cultivating Genius:
| Identity |
- What did I learn about the identities of the character(s)?
- What language (diction–word choice) speaks to identity?
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| Skills |
- How does the author use language to build momentum?
- How does the author use punctuation in interesting ways? Cite text evidence.
- Predict what will happen next in your annotations.
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| Intellect
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- What new knowledge did I gain from this passage/text?
- What questions do I have about the text?
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| Criticality |
- What is the problem or conflict in the text?
- How can this writing serve to disrupt, unhinge, disquiet bias, racism, oppression, harm and pain?
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| Joy |
- What examples of beautiful language are presented in this passage or text?
- How does this text elicit joy?
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Students will write about this piece of informational text using “They say/I say” format (2014, Graff & Birkenstein). I learned about this book during the PhilWP summer institute and have used it ever since. Although it provides templates, which by design are formulaic, the goal is to have students internalize the moves writers make when responding to a text. Here is the graphic organizer I provide students with that is adapted from templates in the book. The goal is for students to compose a two-paragraph response. In “they say” students identify the author’s claim and supporting details and cite text evidence that is connected to the claim followed by commentary. In paragraph two, “I say,” students respond to the text from their perspective. If the article contains an arguable claim they may agree, disagree, or somewhat agree with the author. In the case of this article about Syrian refugee women performing Antigone in Lebanon, they will share their thoughts about the event, make connections, and write about what strikes them as interesting, important, confusing, etc.
Finally, I will have students research to find a recent article from a credible source about immigration, refugees, etc. Perhaps they will share their findings in a mini-presentation or find an article with a partner. Links to all student-selected articles will be shared so that they will be able to read and respond to an additional article. The goal of this unit is to have students read across genres–poetry, verse novel, myth/Greek drama, and informational text–and be exposed to strong female protagonists who are searching for justice and who will not cease despite impediments on their journey. We will circle back to our 9th grade overarching essential questions: Who am I? How do I interact with the environment? How does my environment affect me? And also reconsider our EQs for this unit: What makes a hero? What lessons does one learn from a tragedy? What is our responsibility to ourselves, our family, our country?
Uribe begins, “I want to name the voices behind the stories that take place here” (9) and ends Antígona González with the plural: “We want to name the voices behind the stories that take place here” (167). Just as tragedy comes full circle, the individual becomes the collective. By reading these texts–ancient and contemporary–we, students and teachers, learn how to see and hear ourselves in these resonant voices.
Lesson: Reading Informational Text The tragedy giving hope to Syria’s women – BBC News
| Time: 2 classes
Objective: SWBAT read and annotate the article, “The Tragedy Giving Hope to Syria’s Women” in order to understand how Sophocles’ Antigone is performed today as a vehicle of social justice.
Standards: English Language Arts Standards » Reading: Informational Text » Grade 9-10
English Language Arts Standards » Writing » Grade 9-10
Instructional Strategies: Guided reading, think aloud, annotating with a purpose, think/write/pair/share
Materials: Text: The tragedy giving hope to Syria’s women – BBC News
They say, I say graphic organizer
New Vocabulary: criticality, purpose formula
Lesson Introduction: Introduce Muhammad’s five pursuits: identity, skills, intellect, criticality, and joy. Students will annotate the article using Muhammad’s five pursuits and the guiding questions from Cultivating Genius.
Direct Instruction: I will share an exemplar response with students.
Day 1: “They say” paragraph exemplar
Day 2: “I say” paragraph exemplar
Closure on Day 1: Students will read their purpose formulas to their partner/table group.
Closure on Day 2: Students will read their “I say” paragraph to their partner/table group. |
Genre study: THE VERSE NOVEL
Text: Uribe’s Antígona González
The author, Sara Uribe, in “Antígona González: Thinking Through Language, the Body, Writing, and Translation in the Present,” (2019) summarizes the intention behind her verse novel: “[to] imagine alternative ways of writing that insist on representing the 37,000 bodies that are missing [in Mexico].” The reasons students will read her work is to learn about multiple, diverse perspectives from a culture other than their own, to appreciate the retelling of Antigone through the genre of poetic prose that fictionalizes real events, and to make text-to-text connections to Sophocles’ tragedy to which Uribe alludes.
To open our reading of Antígona González and Antigone, students will collaborate on the Question Formulation Technique (2011). I will use maps of the settings of the texts– Tamaulipas, Mexico, and Thebes, Greece–as the QFocus. Implementing the QFT as a pre-reading technique seems to work well. The students will generate questions about these places in anticipation of reading the contemporary verse novel and the ancient drama, which leads them to make connections between the works of Uribe and Sophocles from the start.
Next, Students will read aloud excerpted poems from Uribe’s verse novel in Spanish and in English. Her text offers a side-by-side translation. If students have a home language, they may translate one of the verses as well.
An extension of composing an original ode is to have students create side by side translations of their praise poems a la Uribe’s verse novel, Antígona González. They may translate their poem into their home language or another language that they know, into Spanish, which all 9th graders take, or write formal and informal versions of their odes.
Genre study: ANCIENT GREEK DRAMA
Text: Sophocles’ Antigone
I will implement drama practices including tableaus, and two new techniques that I learned in this course: conscience alley and writing in role. I will implement “Conscience alley” (See Drama Strategies) with students during our reading of Antigone. It is described as follows: “Participants form two lines representing an alley. A key character [for our purposes, Kreon] walks down the human alley while students/associated characters voice possible advice and thoughts to him/her” (Farmer, as cited in Medina et al., 2021, p. 139). I can envision students engaging in this activity with Kreon as the main character walking among the citizens of Thebes as hurl arguments to persuade him to change his mind about Antigone’s guilt
Also, students will engage in “Writing in role,” which invites “participants [to] write a piece of text as explicit or implied characters in the story (a journal, a letter, a newspaper, a flyer, etc.)” (Farmer, as cited in Medina et al., 2021, p. 139). Students may assume the persona of any character in Antigone and compose a letter to that character from themselves or from another character in the play. This is incorporated in the fourth quadrant below. In lieu of comprehension questions and quizzes, students will create a two-page spread in their notebook as a reader response assignment. I chose to have students do this three times (I chunk the play into three parts since Braun’s translation does not have traditional acts and scenes) to demonstrate their understanding.
Four Quadrants Antigone
| An illuminating Quotation
Cite in MLA format (Sophocles #).
Explain: What does the quote mean?
(1-2 sentences)
Why does it matter? (1-2 sentences) |
Sketch the quotation (Do your best)
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| Compose a haiku, tanka, or found poem using words from Antigone.
Haiku– three-line, 5,7,5 syllable count
Tanka–five-line, 5, 7, 5, 7, 7 syllable count
“Found Poetry” with Rich in Colors |
Letter to a character, from another character or yourself (approx. 2 paragraphs)
Dear Antigone, Ismeme, Kreon, sentry, Koryphaios, Haimon, messenger, Tieresias, Eurydice |
Students engage in a jigsaw on Greek theater and the tragic hero. They read Aristotelian Definition of Tragedy and Aristotle’s Tragic Hero. They analyze Kreon’s character and students formulate claims around if Kreon is a tragic hero.
Another lesson will be to compare excerpts from different translations (we read Braun’s) in order to consider how diction affects and changes meaning. Reading texts in translation, especially one as timeless as Antigone, highlights the collective struggles of Sophocles’ tragic characters, and like much literature, reflects what it means to be human.
Benchmark writing project:
Students will write collaboratively to compose a verse play inspired by Antigona González or a drama set in the present-day rather than in ancient times. Students may consider setting their plays outside of the U.S. to think about how the texts we read center young women who defy the unjust laws of her society and span both time and place. I will encourage multilingual students to incorporate their home languages into their original plays. Their plays may be sequels, visit characters in the afterlife, depict stories of civil disobedience, or may be thematically related in terms of student-selected social justice issues. They may be tragicomedies. The possibilities abound.
Students will collaborate in groups of four or five to compose their one act plays. They will decide on a plot structure: Freytag’s pyramid, the Fichtean Curve, The Hero’s Journey, or in media res. They will make decisions about how to incorporate the six elements of drama from Aristotle’s Poetics into their original plays: plot, character, theme, music, diction, and spectacle. Writing dialogues and monologues give attention to mood and tone, literary elements that are difficult to teach but come naturally when students are using their authentic voices to write.
Student ‘companies’ will perform the play in class for the audience of their peers or they have the option of recording it in advance and then showing the video in class. They will give and receive feedback to their peers using the PVLEGS rubric (Palmer, 2011). Overall, students will have applied four of our five core values throughout this writing project: inquiry, collaboration, presentation, and reflection. Also, they may have engaged in research, another core value, during their playwriting.
Our 9th grade students recently finished their one act plays, and reflected on the process of writing and performing them. In response to my question: What did you learn from collaborating to write your one act play? I will offer three of their reflections: “Your creativity expands a lot when you’re writing something like the play;” “I learned that anyone can be a writer and an actor;” and “Greek theater doesn’t have to be boring.” I appreciate that even if some did not enjoy reading Antigone, they still admit to learning through collaboration with their peers. Some themes I noticed were that students spoke of the difficulty of the group writing process and the values of teamwork and creativity.
Both of my 11th grade teaching assistants reflected on the 9th graders’ playwriting. One TA offers: “Students were brave enough to get in front of their classmates and peers and be creative. It was so entertaining to watch how much effort and skill they put into their presentations. As I watched it I noticed that a lot of people were engaged and it was almost like I was in a real theater sort of.” The second TA reflects: “Their plays were so full of emotion and conflict resolution that I had to pause and really appreciate their effort in following the script, using information about Greek theater and more. along with that people got the opportunity to perform live and they gave lots of emotion and made sure the audience felt it. It was awesome and I can’t wait to read more of their work!”
Lesson: CREATING a PASTICHE or HOMAGE (video)–students will create videos inspired by lines from Sophocles’ Antigone and Uribe’s Antígona González
| Time: 4 classes
Objective: SWBAT collaborate in order to create a pastiche or homage to Antigone and/or Antígona González.
Standards: English Language Arts Standards » Writing » Grade 9-10
English Language Arts Standards » Speaking & Listening » Grade 9-10
Instructional Strategies: cooperative learning, note catcher, inquiry, peer review/assessment
Materials: Sophocles’ Antigone and Uribe’s Antígona González
New Vocabulary: homage, pastiche Examples of Pastiche and Parody – 2024 – Master Class
Lesson Introduction: Students will view “What is a Parody?”: A Literary Guide for English Students and Teachers and respond to the difference between parody and pastiche.
Direct Instruction: I will offer examples of pastiche, homage, elicit examples from students, and share my own pastiche.
Group Work: Students will collaborate in order to select lines from Sophocles and Uribe’s texts, write their own versions, and create their videos.
Closure: Students will assess their peers using the PVLEGS rubric (Palmer, 2011) |